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Front Cover
Positives
- Strong
- Enough to grab your eye sitting on a shelf with other magazines.
- Colours reflect the target audience
- Good use of different font keeps the reader interested
Negatives
-The modle is very dark compared to the mise en scene
- Missing a / in the date
- Spelling mistake 'stylish
Contents Page
Positives
- Correct code and conventions
- Strong colours all linked in well
- Nice use of layout clear and stylish
Negatives
- Spelling mistake 'subscription'
- Aline photos
- Fill the empty gaps by moving the text around
Double Page Spread
Positives
- Strong images each side
- The colours linking in with the contents page and the images
- The correct form of writting for the target audience not to formal
Negatives
- Move the heading down and bigger
- Move 'Pluto' so it is visible to the reader
- Add the page number along with who wrote the article